"Alena
had the sickening feeling that she was being watched. Of course, she was
constantly being observed each and every day due to her regrettable situation
in this nightmare of an intergalactic science center that was nothing more than
a glorified space zoo. But this time was
different, she wasn’t being looked at from behind the glass of the observatory,
she was being watched from somewhere inside her biome enclosure. The hair on the back of her neck bristled as
she turned and found herself facing a pair of intense amber-orange eyes that
wore the expression of both anger and yearning, like a wild, caged beast of
prey. The man glared unashamed… almost predatorily at her through the glass.
He was definitely human, but by far
the most otherworldly- looking of the menagerie of humanoids that she had seen
inhabiting the primate section of this despicable science center. Alena stared boldly back at him while
hurriedly taking in his physique, his features, his demeanor. His skin was bronze to golden in color. He was well muscled and looked dreadfully
powerful. His burning orange eyes,
unkempt shoulder length hair and grim set mouth made him look all the more wild
and discomforting. Alena shuddered and
turned away, searching for a place to conceal herself from the unwanted attention,
wondering aloud if her situation could be any more miserable."
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ReplyDeleteI love the description in this excerpt. I can see the alien; don't know if I want to see the alien, but I see him. Great job.
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