"Stabbing
pains shot through the bottoms of Kate’s feet, awakening her instantly. In terror she tried to scream, but no sound
came. Scrambling upright amid her heavy
shackles, she tried to make sense of her surroundings. The cold dampness of the
prison floor only served as an agonizing reminder that the last 24 hours had
not been merely a dream, but a living nightmare. Kate strained to see in the suffocating
darkness, but there wasn’t even an insignificant glimmer of light. All she could hear was the metallic sound of
the irons that bound her ankles as she shifted her position. She waited in silence, finally crying out as
something sharp and pointed stabbed at her bare toes once more. Again and again, she was pierced by some
unknown source until her feet felt wet and sticky with blood. Kicking out reflexively in panic, she made
contact with something alive and slick with fur; a rat! She heard the screech of anger as it
scampered away, but it wasn’t long before it returned with more of its
blood-thirsty companions."
This novel has everything you could ever want in a story: action, adventure, hardship courage, you name it it's got it.
ReplyDeleteI love the use of the five senses here. Gripping beginning...Is this the beginning?
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